She-Ra script: "Into Etheria" #5

For your entertainment I present to you the rarely seen final script for "Into Etheria"; the very first episode of the She-Ra series. Reading through Larry DiTillio's script you will see a show that is still very much in development. Certain pieces of dialogue were either rewritten or removed during the actual production of the episode. You will also see some interesting notes about characters and locations during some of the scene directions. I will try to point out the more notable things during each post. Here are pages twenty to twenty-four of the script. Act two begins and the messenger is "rewarded" for giving Hordak the news...


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